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Do you like taking exams? Of course not! Who does? Only crazy people
like taking exams. Exams are not only difficult, but they take a lot
of our time. We have to prepare for them, sometimes for days or even
weeks. We also must suffer that time in the exam room, afraid to breathe
normally and glancing nervously at the clock or our watches. (I
don't like to take exams.) Unfortunately, many educators
agree that taking tests is the fairest and most convenient way to
check on a student's ability and progress. I'm afraid that tests are
here to stay. (I really don't like to take exams.) |
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Let me tell you about a class picnic we had not long ago. In the
fall, the weather in Taipei is the best of the year. This is the perfect
time to take a picnic, because it is neither hot nor cold, and it
usually doesn't rain then, either. Our class decided to go to Yangmingshan
in October to have our picnic. We prepared for a whole week, deciding
who would be responsible to prepare what food or activity. Our picnic
was a great success. (The temperature was just right, and
the sky was sunny. It wasn't cold or hot, and there wasn't a cloud
in the sky. The weather was perfect. We didn't need our sweaters.)
We ate a lot of well-cooked food, played games, and sang many songs.
I hope we'll go on another picnic soon. |
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Are you ready for the Y2K problem? "Y2K" refers to the Year 2000
("y" for "year," "2" for the 2 in 2000, and "K" for "kilo" meaning
"1000" of something). On the first day of 2000, many computers will
not be able to tell the difference between the year 2000 and the year
1900, so many scientists, government officials, business leaders,
and computer technicians are warning people about the Y2K problem.
(This problem will occur not in 1999 but in the year 2000.)
People should be prepared for these computer problems. (The
year 2000 will give us many problems because of the computer.) Today,
computers help us do almost everything: they help us in schools, in
stores, in government offices, and in hospitals. The people of the
world may suffer many problems if they do not pay attention to the
Y2K problem! (The year 2000 will be the year of Y2K.) |
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What is a juvenile delinquent? The word juvenile refers to a young
person, and a delinquent is a person who behaves in an anti-social
way. Together, these two words as a phrase refer to any young person,
usually one between the ages of about 10-19, who destroys public property
or hurts others physically for fun. This is a serious problem. Young
people should be preparing for their future by studying and practicing
worthwhile skills and hobbies, not breaking things or hurting others.
(Juvenile delinquency is a very important matter which needs to be
solved.) Parents, teachers, and government officials need
to pay more attention to these youths so their and society's future
will be better. (This problem needs our attention because
it is a very serious one.) |
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Why should we participate in sports? I can think of three good reasons.
First, of course, playing sports makes us healthier and strong. (We
will be sick less often and we will have more strength. It's good
to be healthy and strong.) Another reason to join in sports
is to learn to cooperate with others. Most sports are played with
partners, so we can learn how to get along better with others. The
third and perhaps most important reason is that by playing sports,
we can learn to control our behavior better. Learning how to win and
lose are important lessons in life. We cannot always win, nor do we
always lose. Sports can teach us how to work hard for victory and
how to accept defeat graciously. (We must learn how to win
and lose in our lives. Winning and losing are important lessons in
our lives.) For these reasons, everyone should continue playing
their favorite sport or pick up a new one. |
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Some people prefer living in an apartment, but I would rather live
in a house. Apartments can sometimes provide us a view which a house
cannot. Apartment buildings can be skyscrapers, while houses cannot.
(By living in an apartment high up in a tall building, you
can look down on the world below. It's like living like a bird in
a tall tree.) Apartments are often also cheaper than houses
because they are usually smaller, and they don't have much land. However,
for me, a house is the place to be. A house always has a ground floor,
and I enjoy having my feet on the ground. I am not afraid of heights,
but I prefer living next to Mother Earth. Houses usually have yards
large or small, and, again, I like being close to the earth. You can
grow a lawn, or some trees, or flowers, or fruits and vegetables,
whatever you like. (Having a yard lets you grow things. I
really like flowers, fruit trees, and a vegetable garden.)
Houses also likely have neighbors. People who live in apartments usually
do not know their neighbors very well, but those of us who live in
houses frequently do. For these reasons, I hope I can always live
in a house. |
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You probably won't believe this, but I never watch TV. "How can
that be?" you might ask. ("How can a person in the modern
world not watch television?" you might wonder.) Actually,
I don't miss watching TV at all. Although today we can watch more
than 50 channels (if you have cable TV), there are actually very few
good programs. That's why people "channel surf"; they have to flip
through a dozen channels before they can find even one they might
want to watch. (They have to go through a lot of programs
to find one they like.) TV programs take a lot of our time
to watch, too. I have better things to do with my time like exercising,
socializing, and playing sports with my friends, for example. I can
keep my family members company, too. (Or I can take exercise
or play sports with my friends.) Active people do not have
time for television. (If you are a busy person, you probably
don't watch much TV.) For these reasons, why watch TV? |
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When I was a little boy, I used to go fishing and swimming in a
river not far from my home. All the boys and girls would play in the
river almost every day. (We could fish and swim all day long.
I have been fishing since I was a kid.) We could take small
boats out, too. Today, my children do not go near the river. Why?
It is too polluted to use anymore. It is really dirty. Dead fish can
be found everywhere along its shores. The bad smell keeps people away
from it. This water pollution is a serious problem. The government
and industry should clean the river up so we people can use the river
again. (We could go fishing or go swimming in it if we did.
We could take small boats out into it, too.) We could drink
from the river once again. Everyone should do his best to keep nature
clean. |
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