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Summary of A Full Box of Kisses

This is a story in a poor family. A father was infuriated because his three-year- old daughter wasted a roll of gold wrapping paper to decorate a Christmas present. In the next day, the father was embarrassed because his daughter gave him the gift. When he opened the box, he became angry and scolded the little girl. His daughter said " oh! Daddy, it's not empty. I blew kisses into the box." He was deeply moved and regreted. He kept the box and whenever he was disappointed and discourages, he took out the box and felt the love of his daughter.

Summary of A Full Box of Kisses

This is a story happening in a poor family. A father was infuriated because his three-year- old daughter wasted a roll of gold wrapping paper to decorate a Christmas present. The next day, the father was embarrassed because his daughter gave him the gift. When he opened the box, he became angry and scolded the little girl, for the box was empty. His daughter said, "Oh! Daddy, it's not empty. I blew kisses into the box." He was deeply moved and regretful for what he had done. He kept the box and whenever he was disappointed and discouraged, he took out the box to feel the love of his daughter.

Summary of A Full Box of Kisses(2)

A man punished his daughter because she wasted a roll of gold wrapping paper to decorate a box. But when his daughter gave him a big box wrapped with gold paper as a gift. He felt regreted that he shouldn't have punished her. As soon as he opened the box, he became infurited again, for there was nothing inside it. His daughter almost cried and said, "It looks empty, but I put all my kisses and love into it, just for you, Daddy." The man was so moved that he held her tight in his arms. Whenever he was in disappointment, he took out the box because her daughter's love could ease his pain.

Summary of A Full Box of Kisses(2)

A man punished his daughter because she wasted a roll of gold wrapping paper to decorate a box. But when his daughter gave him the big box wrapped with gold paper as a gift. He regretted having punished her. As soon as he opened the box, he became infuriated again, for there was nothing inside it. His daughter almost cried and said, "It wasn't empty. I blew all my kisses and love into it, just for you, Daddy." The man was so moved that he held her tight in his arms. Whenever he was in disappointment, he took out the box because her daughter's love could ease his pain and give him courage..

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