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　Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Jadin. Welcome to Yang-ming Shan National Park. It is one of the National Parks of Taiwan, and it's scenery is quite good. First, I will take all of you to appreciate the most famous flowers of the park-cherry blossoms. The little pink flowers are very cute and they smell good. I will give you twenty minutes to take photographs, and enjoy yourselves. Ok! Everyone, time's up. It's time for lunch. Does anybody know what the most delicious thing in Yang-ming Shan? Oh, nobody knows? Let me tell you the answer: the wild vegetables. They taste very sweet and yummy. You will love it. Oh, we arrive the restaurant. Everyone can get off and enjoy the lunch time, by the way, the fresh fish is also wonderful. Taste it, and you will know how good it is! Does everyone enjoy your lunch? Then we will go to the last point-hot springs. Hot springs can make you relaxed and more energetic. Are you ready to take a bath in a hot spring? But you have to know that if you feel uncomfortable, leave as soon as possible. Everyone should follow the rules, ok? Then, go ahead; it's time for bathing. I believe that everyone would have a nice time today. It is time to say goodbye. If you have another chance to come to Taiwan, don't forget to visit another beautiful place. Good-bye, everyone. See you next time.

　Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Jadin. Welcome to Yang-ming Shan National Park. It is one of the National Parks of Taiwan, and its scenery is quite wonderful. First, I will take all of you to appreciate the most famous flowers of the park-cherry blossoms. The little pink flowers are very cute and they are very fragrant. I will give you twenty minutes to take photographs, and enjoy yourselves. Ok! Everyone, time's up. It's time for lunch. Does anybody know what the most delicious thing is in Yang-ming Shan? Oh, nobody knows? Let me tell you the answer: the wild vegetables. They taste very sweet and yummy. You will love them. Oh, now we arrive at the restaurant. Everyone can get off and enjoy lunch; by the way, the fresh fish is also wonderful. Taste it, and you will know how good it is! Did everyone enjoy your lunch? Then we will go to our last spot-hot springs. The hot springs can relax and energize you. Are you ready to take a bath in a hot spring? Remember, if you feel uncomfortable, leave as soon as possible. Be sure to follow the rules, ok? So, go ahead and have fun. I hope that everyone had a nice time today. It is time to say goodbye. If you have another chance to come to Taiwan, we hope to see you again. Good-bye, everyone. See you next time.

　 Hello,everyone. I am your guide, Grace. Let me describe our happy trip today briefly. After breakfast, the first place we will go is Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall. It is very beautiful and is like a big garden. I'm sure you will have fun there. Chiang Kai-shek is one of the greatest people in our Chinese history. So, you shall never miss it when visiting Taipei. At 12:00, we will have a lunch break. Then we will call on Taipei City Government. So remember to put on your formal dress. Dinner will be at 18:00. After that we will visit Shilin Night Market. It is famous for its delicious foods, such as stench fried beancurd puff and tonque. You can also shop there because there are full of stores. You can get whatever you want. By the way, the things there are usually cheap. So just be yourself. Let's begin our trip.

　 Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Grace. Let me introduce today's happy trip briefly. After breakfast, the first place we will visit is Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall. It is very beautiful and like a big garden. Chiang Kai- shek is one of the greatest people in the Chinese history. He led us to a victory in World War II, so we built this hall in memory of his great contribution to our country. You should never miss it when visiting Taipei. At 12:00, we will have a lunch break. Then we will call at Taipei City Government. It's our administrative center and our mayor, Mr Ma, works there. Remember to put on your formal dress. Dinner will be ready at 18:00. After that we will visit Shilin Night Market. It is famous for its delicious foods, such as stinky to-fu and dumplings. You can also shop there because there are a variety of stores, in which the things are usually less expensive. You can buy whatever you want. So, let's begin our trip.

　 Hello, I am your guide, Sara. And I am going to introduce our tomorrow schedule. At first, you can enjoy all kinds of typical Chinese food for breakfast, including soy-bean milk and steamed bread, etc. After that we will visit our first stop---The National Palace Museum, in which there are the world's largest and the most valuable collection of Chinese art treasures, such as wonderful paintings or delicate sculptures. In addition, it is not only a informative way for local residents to visit but also a good start point for foreign visitors to learn about Chinese culture. Then we will go to a nearby buffet which provides all kinds of food. And after such a big meal, we will go to the Chiang Kai- shek Memorial Hall, which is a beautiful and significant structure in Taiwan. Its range is very wide, and the square not only provides citizens to exercise but also provides a good place for people to hold some activities or parties. In addition, there are National Theater and National Music Hall within it. After a full day, we'll come back to our hotel and have the U.S. cuisine for dinner. Last but not least, you should be care of what you bring along with you and don't forget to take the identified card. Follow the group wherever you go. I'll always be your side tomorrow and no matter what happens, you can find me easily. Above all, have a nice sleep and enjoy yourself tomorrow

　 Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Sara. I am going to introduce our tomorrow's schedule. First, you can enjoy all kinds of Chinese foods for breakfast, including soy-bean milk and steamed bread, etc. After that we'll visit one of the largest museums in the world, the National Palace Museum. It has a large valuable collection of Chinese artistic works, such as paintings and sculptures. In there, I am sure you can learn something about Chinese culture. Then we'll go to a nearby buffet restaurant which provides all kinds of foods. And after such a big meal, we'll go to Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall, which is a beautiful and significant structure in Taiwan. It serves as a good place for people to take exercise, hold activities or parties. In addition, there are National Music Hall and National Theater within it. We can watch musical and drama performances there. After that, we'll go back to our hotel and have American cuisine for dinner. Last but not least, you should watch out for your personal possessions and don't forget to take ID cards and passports with you. Follow the group wherever you go. I'll always be your side and no matter what happens, you can find me easily. Above all, have a nice sleep and enjoy yourself tomorrow.

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Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Jadin. Welcome to Yang-ming Shan National Park. It is one of the National Parks of Taiwan, and it's scenery is quite good. First, I will take all of you to appreciate the most famous flowers of the park-cherry blossoms. The little pink flowers are very cute and they smell good. I will give you twenty minutes to take photographs, and enjoy yourselves. Ok! Everyone, time's up. It's time for lunch. Does anybody know what the most delicious thing in Yang-ming Shan? Oh, nobody knows? Let me tell you the answer: the wild vegetables. They taste very sweet and yummy. You will love it. Oh, we arrive the restaurant. Everyone can get off and enjoy the lunch time, by the way, the fresh fish is also wonderful. Taste it, and you will know how good it is! Does everyone enjoy your lunch? Then we will go to the last point-hot springs. Hot springs can make you relaxed and more energetic. Are you ready to take a bath in a hot spring? But you have to know that if you feel uncomfortable, leave as soon as possible. Everyone should follow the rules, ok? Then, go ahead; it's time for bathing. I believe that everyone would have a nice time today. It is time to say goodbye. If you have another chance to come to Taiwan, don't forget to visit another beautiful place. Good-bye, everyone. See you next time.	Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Jadin. Welcome to Yang-ming Shan National Park. It is one of the National Parks of Taiwan, and its scenery is quite wonderful. First, I will take all of you to appreciate the most famous flowers of the park-cherry blossoms. The little pink flowers are very cute and they are very fragrant. I will give you twenty minutes to take photographs, and enjoy yourselves. Ok! Everyone, time's up. It's time for lunch. Does anybody know what the most delicious thing is in Yang-ming Shan? Oh, nobody knows? Let me tell you the answer: the wild vegetables. They taste very sweet and yummy. You will love them. Oh, now we arrive at the restaurant. Everyone can get off and enjoy lunch; by the way, the fresh fish is also wonderful. Taste it, and you will know how good it is! Did everyone enjoy your lunch? Then we will go to our last spot-hot springs. The hot springs can relax and energize you. Are you ready to take a bath in a hot spring? Remember, if you feel uncomfortable, leave as soon as possible. Be sure to follow the rules, ok? So, go ahead and have fun. I hope that everyone had a nice time today. It is time to say goodbye. If you have another chance to come to Taiwan, we hope to see you again. Good-bye, everyone. See you next time.
Hello,everyone. I am your guide, Grace. Let me describe our happy trip today briefly. After breakfast, the first place we will go is Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall. It is very beautiful and is like a big garden. I'm sure you will have fun there. Chiang Kai-shek is one of the greatest people in our Chinese history. So, you shall never miss it when visiting Taipei. At 12:00, we will have a lunch break. Then we will call on Taipei City Government. So remember to put on your formal dress. Dinner will be at 18:00. After that we will visit Shilin Night Market. It is famous for its delicious foods, such as stench fried beancurd puff and tonque. You can also shop there because there are full of stores. You can get whatever you want. By the way, the things there are usually cheap. So just be yourself. Let's begin our trip.	Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Grace. Let me introduce today's happy trip briefly. After breakfast, the first place we will visit is Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall. It is very beautiful and like a big garden. Chiang Kai- shek is one of the greatest people in the Chinese history. He led us to a victory in World War II, so we built this hall in memory of his great contribution to our country. You should never miss it when visiting Taipei. At 12:00, we will have a lunch break. Then we will call at Taipei City Government. It's our administrative center and our mayor, Mr Ma, works there. Remember to put on your formal dress. Dinner will be ready at 18:00. After that we will visit Shilin Night Market. It is famous for its delicious foods, such as stinky to-fu and dumplings. You can also shop there because there are a variety of stores, in which the things are usually less expensive. You can buy whatever you want. So, let's begin our trip.
Hello, I am your guide, Sara. And I am going to introduce our tomorrow schedule. At first, you can enjoy all kinds of typical Chinese food for breakfast, including soy-bean milk and steamed bread, etc. After that we will visit our first stop---The National Palace Museum, in which there are the world's largest and the most valuable collection of Chinese art treasures, such as wonderful paintings or delicate sculptures. In addition, it is not only a informative way for local residents to visit but also a good start point for foreign visitors to learn about Chinese culture. Then we will go to a nearby buffet which provides all kinds of food. And after such a big meal, we will go to the Chiang Kai- shek Memorial Hall, which is a beautiful and significant structure in Taiwan. Its range is very wide, and the square not only provides citizens to exercise but also provides a good place for people to hold some activities or parties. In addition, there are National Theater and National Music Hall within it. After a full day, we'll come back to our hotel and have the U.S. cuisine for dinner. Last but not least, you should be care of what you bring along with you and don't forget to take the identified card. Follow the group wherever you go. I'll always be your side tomorrow and no matter what happens, you can find me easily. Above all, have a nice sleep and enjoy yourself tomorrow	Hello, everyone. I am your guide, Sara. I am going to introduce our tomorrow's schedule. First, you can enjoy all kinds of Chinese foods for breakfast, including soy-bean milk and steamed bread, etc. After that we'll visit one of the largest museums in the world, the National Palace Museum. It has a large valuable collection of Chinese artistic works, such as paintings and sculptures. In there, I am sure you can learn something about Chinese culture. Then we'll go to a nearby buffet restaurant which provides all kinds of foods. And after such a big meal, we'll go to Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall, which is a beautiful and significant structure in Taiwan. It serves as a good place for people to take exercise, hold activities or parties. In addition, there are National Music Hall and National Theater within it. We can watch musical and drama performances there. After that, we'll go back to our hotel and have American cuisine for dinner. Last but not least, you should watch out for your personal possessions and don't forget to take ID cards and passports with you. Follow the group wherever you go. I'll always be your side and no matter what happens, you can find me easily. Above all, have a nice sleep and enjoy yourself tomorrow.

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