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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. In every
aspects, computers make our life more convenient and comfortable. We
can log on them and gain a lot of latest information. We also can enter
the electronic talking room to talk to others who come from anywhere
in the world. Besides, we can buy everything on the internet. You just
click your mouse, and what you want will be sent to your home. |
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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. People nowsdays often use computers to get the latest information or to keep in touch with relatives and friends who live far away. Some people even book train tickets or pizza on the internet. Computers surely make our life become more and more convenient. Personally, I have a liking for computers. At my leisure, I always check up my mailbox to see if my friends send me e-mail or not. I have lots of friends live in foreign countries, so it is very convenient for me to keep in touch with them on the internet. I also like to shop online. In this way, I can find lots of gorgeous and unique stuff I've never seen. I ever go to the National Geographic web site to check up some information of animals or scenic spots. I think that computers let us learn something that we can't learn from our text book. They really spice up our life and make it full of excitement every day. |
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. Modern people often use computers to get the latest information or to keep in touch with their relatives and friends who live far away. Some people even book tickets or order pizza on the Internet. Computers surely make our life become more and more convenient. Personally, I have a liking for computers. I have lots of friends living in foreign countries, so it is very convenient for me to keep in touch with them through e-mail. At my leisure, I always check my mailbox to see if my friends send me any e-mail or not. I also like to shop on-line. In this way, I can find lots of gorgeous and unique stuff I've never seen. I once went to the National Geographic web site to check up some information about animals and scenic spots. It is really a lot of fun. Computers help us learn something that we can't learn from our textbooks. They really add spice to our life and make it full of excitement every day. |
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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. With the improvement of technology, many complicated works can be done with computers. In this way, life is more convenient than it used to be. For example, you can get much information on the net, like the latest news, the weather forecast, the time when a movie starts, and the result of a ball game. What is batter, you can even shop on the net instead of going out to buy what you need. Personally, I have a liking for computers. It almost becomes a necessity in my daily life. I play games when I am bored and lonely. I communicate with friends far away through e-mail. There is also much room open to the people who have the same interests to discuss or exchange opinions. I believe that computers will be a necessity in the future. |
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. With the improvement of technology, a lot of complicated work can be done with computers. In this way, life has become more convenient than it used to be. For example, by surfing the Internet, you can search for the data you need, read the latest news or weather forecast, and even learn about the result of a ball game. What is better, you can even shop and book tickets at home before your computer instead of going out by yourself. Personally, I have a liking for computers. It almost has become a necessity in my daily life. I play games when I am bored or lonely. I communicate with friends far away through e-mail. In addition, in the chat room I am able to discuss or exchange opinions with those who have the same interests with me. It is so much fun using a computer. I believe that computers will become more popular and indispensable in the future. |
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Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They surely become more and more important in the future. Computers make this whole world like a global village. People communicate with each other by computers instead of letters. When you want to search for some materials, in seconds, they will show you a long list of data. You can also shop on the net, such as booking plane tickets, buying daily necessities, ….etc. Personally, I have a dislike for computers. Because too many people commit crimes by computers. For example, Yahoo was hit previously. It is very difficult for the police to know who did it. There are also some people who have bad advertisements to cheat others. Pornographic pictures are available on the Internet which make our minds corrupt and endanger our future generation. Judging from what I mention above, I don't think computers will do us good. |
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. They surely become more and more essential in the modern society. Computers have made the whole world a global village. People communicate with each other by using computers instead of writing letters. When you need any data, just surf the Internet. In minutes, what you want shows on the screen. You can also shop on the net, such as booking tickets, ordering daily necessities, etc. Personally, I have a dislike for computers. Too many people use the net illegally. For example, Yahoo was hit some months ago. It is very difficult for the police to know who did it. There are also some people who post false advertisements to cheat others. Pornographic pictures are available on the Internet too, which corrupts our minds and endangers our future generation. Judging from what I have mentioned above, I don't think computers will do us good. That is the reason why I don't like computers. |