A Place I Wish to Visit

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Traveling is an important means of education and recreation. It can not only broden our horizons but also develop our bodies. There are many scenic spots which I want to visit on earth. But the place I wish to visit most is Yellow Stone National Park in America.

Yellow Stone National Park is very large. Its area is as large as half Taiwan. It goes without saying that there are a lot of natural scenery and wild animals, let alone the splendid mountains and rivers. Many people maybe think that it’s tired and it wastes a lot of time to see anything around the Park. There are just stones, deserts, animals, etc. But I don’t agree with them. As far as I am concerned, all things which are created by nature are miracles. No matter what in that Park. Furthermore, the Yellow Stone Park is the best geography classroom. If you go to visit it, you must gain a lot of knowledge about geography. In a word, I would like to visit the Yellow Stone Park once in my whole life if I can.

Traveling is an important means of education and recreation. It helps broaden our horizons. There are many scenic spots which I want to visit on earth, but the place I wish to visit most is Yellowstone National Park in America.

Yellowstone National Park is very large. The area is as large as half of Taiwan. It goes without saying that it has a lot of beautiful scenery and wild animals, not to mention the splendid mountains and rivers. Many people may think that it’s tiring and it wastes a lot of time walking the park. There are just stones, deserts, animals, but I don’t agree with them. As far as I am concerned, all things which are created by nature are miracles, no matter what they are. Furthermore, Yellowstone Park is the best geography classroom. If you go to visit it, you are certain to gain a lot of knowledge about geography. In a word, I would like to visit Yellowstone Park once in my lifetime if I can.