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| I like Saturday. There are two TV programs I like projected on Saturday. One is a cartoon, another is a Japanese performance. But I especially like the cartoon. The story is about a little girl and a pair of magical playing cards. There is no bad person in it. It is a lovely and peaceful story. And its idea is interesting, too. I have watched cartoons and comics since I was very young. I'm always attracted by beautiful and cute pictures, and interesting and exciting stories. Mother thinks cartoons and comics are children's things. But I think they are art. To produce a good cartoon or a good comic is never easy. It also needs time and work. So they should be appreciated by people of all ages. | I like Saturday. There are two TV programs I like to watch on Saturday. One is a cartoon; the other is a Japanese performance. I especially like the cartoon. The story is about a little girl and a pair of magical playing cards. There are no bad characters in it. It is a lovely and peaceful story. The story line is interesting, too. I have watched cartoons and comics since I was very young. I'm always attracted by beautiful and cute pictures, and interesting and exciting stories. Mother thinks cartoons and comics are children's things, but I think they are art. To produce a good cartoon or a good comic is never easy. It also needs time and work. So they should be appreciated by people of all ages. |