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Can men and women just be friends instead of lovers? It's an interesting and not simple question. You can never tell that the girl you don't like today may become the attractive girl you want to chase after a period of time. The relationship between men and women is so marvelous!
Sometimes I would also mistake the familiarity of opposite sex as a kind of love. The song named "Simply friends" sung by David Tao describes relationship between men and women is so complicated. But in my opinion, only do we regard it as natural the friendship between men and women can be in existence.

Can men and women just be friends instead of lovers? It's an interesting and complicated question. You can never tell that the girl you don't like today may one day become the attractive one you want to chase after. The relationship between men and women is so mysterious!
Sometimes I would also mistake the familiarity of opposite sex for a kind of love, and the song "Simply friends" sung by David Tao best describes such a complicated relationship between men and women. But in my opinion, only when we regard it as natural can the mutual relationship between men and women be in existence.

I am always thinking that there are an angel and a devil in our minds. They give us opposite opinions when we do anything, especially in studying. On weekend, my angel advises me to make use of the weekend to study hard. On the contrary, my devil would want me to take a rest, go shopping or play video games. In fact, I often follow the latter's idea. People all have sense of laziness.
I want to ask if those who enter the national university defeat their devil or they even forget it! I really admire them. However, angels and devils not only appear during my studying but in my daily life. For example, you may hate somebody without any reasons or don't want to give seat to the elderly when you are tired. No wonder people put forward the idea that human nature is bad in ancient times. Nobody is perfect, is it?

I am always thinking that there are an angel and a devil in our minds. They often give us opposite opinions on whatever we are trying to do, especially on studying. On weekends, my angel advises me to make use of my time to study hard. On the contrary, my devil would want me to take a rest, go shopping or play video games. In fact, I often follow the latter's idea because people tend to be lazy.
I want to ask if those who enter the national university defeat their devil or if they even forget it! I really admire them. However, angels and devils appear not only during my studying but in my daily life. For example, I may sometimes hate somebody without any reasons or don't want to give a seat to the elderly when I am tired. No wonder people in ancient times put forward the idea that human nature is bad. After all, nobody is perfect, are they?

My Impression of Australia

Australia is a nation which has large lands but less population. So far as I am concerned, Australia is a beautiful and charming place. It attracts a large number of tourists every year. It has so many wonderful scenery and special animals. And I know it has a large desert.

I believe that Australia has a reputation as a paradise. The air is clear and fresh; the people are nice and kind, the food is delicious and varied, the climate is warm and suitable for traveling. Because Australia is in the south hemisphere, so if you can not stand for the chilly weather in Taiwan, you can go to Australia and enjoy the warm spring. On the other hand, I know some popular bands and super stars that come from Australia, such as Savage Garden and the movie star, Mel Gibson.

My Impression of Australia

Australia is a nation which has a large land area but a small population. As far as I am concerned, Australia is a beautiful and charming place. It attracts a large number of tourists every year. It has so much wonderful scenery and special animals. And I know it has a large desert.

I believe that Australia has a reputation as a paradise. The air is clear and fresh; the people are nice and kind; the food is delicious and varied and the climate is warm and suitable for traveling. Because Australia is in the southern hemisphere, if you can not stand the chilly weather in Taiwan, you can go to Australia and enjoy the warm spring. In addition, I know some popular bands and super stars that come from Australia, such as Savage Garden and the movie star, Mel Gibson.

The Bushiban

As a student in Taiwan, many people have the experience to go to the bushiban. There are many advantages of it. Firstly, attending the bushiban helps us understand what we don't learn well at school. Secondly, it can help students set up systematic ways of studying. In this way, they can get better grades.

On the other hand, it also has its disadvantages. It makes students lose the chances to study by themselves. Moreover, the cram school uses one method to teach all students and sometimes it is not an effective approach for everybody. All they do is force students to get good grades in a short time. In my opinion, students hardly develop a proper attitude toward learning under this circumstance. Therefore, the bushiban actually plays an ambiguous and embarrassing role our educational system. Take me for example, I seem to have depended on the bushiban since I was an elementary school student.

The Internet

The Internet, one of the most influential inventions, makes our lives more convenient than ever. Because of it, the world becomes small. We can not only write e-mail to friends but also buy almost everything through the Internet. If you feel bored, you can surf the Internet to have a chat with someone. You can tell him everything without knowing each other. If you don't want to go shopping outside, you can order things through the Internet, and they will be sent in no time.

Personally, I believe there are many advantages of the Internet. It makes the world become a global village. No matter where you are, you can always get the latest information. Most importantly, when you are on the Internet, you will get much pleasure and confidence. As far as I am concerned, the Internet is really the most wonderful invention!

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