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After twenty days, it will be a special day. It is the first day in twenty-one centenary. In that special year, I have two wishes for myself. One of my wishes is that I hope I can read more books which are not the study books, because I think the books can let me get more information form this world. The world is ran very fast, and we need to follow the world. If we do not follow it, we will become animals which do not know anything and just want to eat and sleep. So reading the books is very important. And I hope I can read more special books in order to increasing me mind. The other is I hope my English can be better, because my English is very bad last year, and it is still bad now. I think that it is bad because I did not read it very offten and did not work hard to it . But I do not have any intreastings to it . I do not know why . But it is a very important language in the world . So I need to work harder for it. I do not have any great wishes . I just have two common wishes and
I hope I can do them well . |
In twenty days, it will be a special day. It is the first day of the millennium. In the special year, I have two wishes for myself. One of my wishes is that I hope I can read more books which are not the textbooks because I think the books can help me get more knowledge and information. The world changes very fast, and we need to follow the changing society. If we do not follow it, we will be like animals which do not know anything about the world and just want to eat and sleep. So reading books is very important. And I hope I can read more specific books in order to broaden my mind. The other one is that I hope my English can be better. I think that my English has been poor since I entered high school because I did not study it more and did not work hard for it. This is because I am not interested in it. I do not know why I don't like it, but I know it is a very important language in the world. So I need to work harder to improve my English. I do not have any great wishes. I just have two common wishes and I hope I can make it in the coming year. |
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Since I went to the senior high school, I become siuggish and careless. I don't like studying and writing, so my lessons was bader and bader. Therefore I hope I can studu harder and pass any examination. I am a thin and weak girl. My weight is only 38 kg. That's so fearful! When I was born, I was not health and strong. So I wish I can become strong in the new year. I hope I can buy a CD player. My older sister has one but she is very stingy. So I must beg piteously for her when I went to listen the CD. I can't always stand this thing happen. Therefore I must gave my own CD player. I hope I can grow up quickly. So I can help my parents making money, then they don't such hard to raise the family. |
Since I went to senior high school, I have become sluggish and careless. I don't like studying and writing, so my lessons go from bad to worse. Therefore I hope I can study harder and pass the examination. I am a thin and weak girl. My weight is only 38 kg. That's a pity! This is because when I was born, I was not healthy and strong. So I wish I could become stronger in the coming new year. I hope I can buy a CD player. My older sister has one but she is very stingy. So I must beg her piteously when I want to listen to the CD. I can't always stand this. Therefore, I am longing to have my own CD player. I hope I can grow up quickly, so that I can help my parents make money. Then they don't need to work so hard to raise the family. |
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| January: I wish I could
pass this year happily. February: I hope I can take a lot of March: I wish I can get good grades in exam. April: I hope I can have a wonderful spring vacation. May: I hope Mom have a good birthday. June: I hope I can have a good graduated travel. July: I wish my sister can enter good college. August: I hope I can improve my swimming skill. September: I wish I can adapt the life of the third year in senior high school. October: I hope I can have a special birthday. November: I hope I can study more hard. December: I hope that next year will be better than this year. |
January: I hope I can
go through this year happily. February: I hope I can take part in a lot of activities March: I hope I can get good grades in exams. April: I hope I can have a wonderful spring vacation. May: I hope Mom will have a wonderful birthday. June: I hope I can have a good graduation trip. July: I hope my sister can enter a good college. August: I hope I can improve my swimming skill. September: I hope I can adapt myself to the life of the third year in senior high school. October: I hope I can have a different birthday. November: I hope I can study harder. December: I hope that next year will be better than this year. |