學生原始範文

　I was born in Taipei in Taiwan Taipei is the capital of Taiwan, on 21st 1982.There are five people in my family including my father, my mother, my grandmother, my old sister, and myself. My father is a businessman and my mother is a accounting. My sister is a university Student. She studies International trade in T.K. university. My sister and I have good emotion. When I studied in elementary school, my grade is not very good. Because I took part in orchestra of school. I spend more time practicing musical instrument than study. But when I was a junior high school student, I knew I want to study in senior high school, not vocational high school. So I began to study hard. After junior high school, I went to Tang Tung High School . It is a very big school. Now I study in second year. My habit is play the guitar, listen to music, singing and play computer. Sometimes I also like reading some extracurricular books. I have learnt play the guitar more than one year. When I entered Tang Tung High School, I join the Guitar Club. I relax mood when I listen to music. I like popular music, especially the song express one's emotion. I don't have a lot of merit, I am not smart, but I have a kindhearted heart. And I have sympathy, I like to help people who have trouble. Now I just have one ambition. It is enter a good university. I will buckle down and work hard to realize my goal.

　 I was born in Taipei, the capital of Taiwan, on 21st 1982. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my grandmother, my old sister, and myself. My father is a businessman and my mother is an accountant. My sister is a university student. She studies International Trade in T.K. University. My sister and I get along with each other very well. When I studied in elementary school, my grades were not very good. It is because I took part in orchestra in my school. I spent more time practicing playing the instrument than studying. But when I was a junior high school student, I knew I wanted to study in a good senior high school, not a vocational one. So I began to study harder. After junior high school, I went to Ta- Tung Senior High School. It is a very big school. Now I am in my second year. My habit is playing the guitar, listening to music, singing songs and playing the computer games. I also enjoy doing some outside readings. I have learnt to play the guitar for more than one year. When I entered Ta- Tung High School, I joined the Guitar Club. I feel very relaxed when I listen to music. I like popular music, especially the songs expressing one's emotions. I don't have a lot of merits. I am not smart, but I have a kind heart; I like to help people who are in trouble. At the present time, my ambition is to enter a good university. I will buckle myself down to my studies and work hard to achieve my goal.

　 I was born in a sweat family on October fifteenth 1982. My star is Libra. And I think there are some Libra's characteristics that I have. For example, I am easy to get along with others and the relationship between me and my friends is taking an important role in my life. I am lazy ; sometimes I prefer staying at home and reading to going out to do some activities. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my little brother, my grandmother, and myself. My grandfather was dead two years ago and I miss him very much. When I was a child, I was not very happy. Maybe I did not find someone who really knew me well . So I can not remember anything about my childhood. And I was an average student in my elementary school. So my mother sent me to Ta-Tung junior high school. During the three years, I found true friends and I learned many things from them. And our friendship is good. I ment my teacher who I was looking for. She played a very important role in my life. She changed my mind and I did not feel unhappy in my life. I also found my goals in my life so I wanted to realize them. I won't be confused any more. I am very lucky to enter a high school without the examination. So I entered Ta-Tung senior high school. I have to study harder than anyone does, but I did not get good grades in the mid-term exams. Maybe the reason is I did not study hard enough. But my friends help me to change my bed study habbit. I am happy that I have such nice friends. Now I think I am a changed person. Maybe I will do better in the next mid-term exams.

I was born in a sweet family on October fifteenth 1982. My star is Libra. And I think there are some Libra's characteristics that I have. For example, It is easy for me to get along with others and the relationship between me and my friends plays an important role in my life. Sometimes I prefer to stay at home reading books rather than go out for some activities. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my little brother, my grandmother, and myself. My grandfather was dead two years ago and I miss him very much. When I was a child, I was not very happy. Maybe I did not find someone who really understood me well . So I can not remember anything about my childhood. And I was an average student in elementary school. So my mother sent me to Ta-Tung junior high school. During the three years in this school, I found true friends and I learned many things from them. And our friendship is good. I met my favorite teacher who I was looking for. She played a very important role in my life; she changed my mind and I did not feel unhappy at that time. Under her guidance I also found my goals in my life , so I wanted to realize them. After meeting the teacher I would not be confused any more. I am very lucky to enter Ta-Tung senior high school without the entrance examination. I have to study harder than anyone else, but I did not get good grades in the mid-term exam. Maybe the reason is I did not study hard enough. Fortunately, my friends help me change my bad study habbit. I am happy that I have such nice friends. Now I think I am a changed person. Maybe I will do better in the next mid-term exam.

　 I was born on September 23,1982. There are four people in my family, including my father, my mother, my sister, and myself. But my sister died when I was a sixth grader in elementary school. She was a kind and friendly person. However I always had quarrels with her. At that time when she died, I felt very sad. This made me realize that I should cherish everything in my life otherwise it will be too late for me to regret. After elementary school, where I was an above-average student. I often got the prizes from my teachers, and I felt the teachers liked me. In my childhood, televisions played a very important role in my life. I almost stayed in front of the TV set all day long except for studying and eating. But with the time passing by, the school work was getting more and harder. I couldn't spend much time watching TV, and started to study harder. When I was a little girl, my mother taught me to learn calligraphy, and later I had a sense of achievement from it. The special ability made me gain a lot of friendship and brought some happiness to me. Besides, I like to paint, especially sketch. I can spend all afternoon sketching and then put it on the wall to decorate my room. I have no great dreams. But I hope I can work in the field which I am interested in. And I will do my work with enthusiasm.

　 I was born in the country of 苗栗 on October 31,1983.There were five people in my family including my father, my mother, myself, my younger sister, and my younger brother. I was the oldest child in my family. And my parents loved us very much. So them gave us the best and hoped us to have achievements in the future. I also hoped that I could not make them disappoint. When I studied in elementally school, my parents were working in other place. They did not care about us by themselves and we lived with our grandfather and grandmother in 苗栗. So I must be responsible for my younger sister and brother's behaviors, and teach them what good is and what bad is. As I entered junior high School, my lessons became much better. Because I was sensible with human affairs, most of my teachers liked me, especially my Chinese teacher. She had a great influence on me. She always stressed the importance of honest, good, and serious. She was the best teacher on earth, and I liked her very much. Now I was a happily senior high school student. I liked reading, singing, and watching TV. I always loved sitting on the soft and reading quietly. When my mood was bad, I always went to singing with my good friends, and my mood would turn better. There were always many interesting things in TV, and sometimes watching TV could get knowledge. So I liked watching TV. Although I more liked statically activity, but I do some sports now and then. I want to be a teacher in the future, like my Chinese teacher in junior high school. Because I like children and I have patience. I believe that I can teach my students well, and they will love me.

I was born in the country of 苗栗 on October 31, 1983. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my younger sister, my younger brother, and myself. I am the oldest child in my family. And my parents love us very much. So they give us the best and wish us to have achievements in the future. I also hope that I would not make them disappointed. When I studied in elementally school, my parents worked in another place. They could not take care of us by themselves and we lived with our grandfather and grandmother in 苗栗. So I had to be responsible for my younger sister's and brother's behaviors, and taught them what is good and what is bad. As I entered junior high school, my grades became much better. Because I was sensible with human affairs, most of my teachers liked me, especially my Chinese teacher. She had a great influence on me. She always stressed the importance of honesty, kindness, and diligence. She was the best teacher on earth, and I like her very much. Now I am a happy senior high school student. I like reading, singing, and watching TV. I always love sitting on the sofa and reading quietly. When my mood is bad, I always go to sing with my good friends, and my mood will turn better. There are always many interesting things on TV, and sometimes watching TV can get more knowledge. So I like watching TV. Although I like statically activities more, I do some sports now and then. I want to be a teacher in the future, like my Chinese teacher in junior high school. This is because I like children and I have patience. I believe that I can teach my students well, and they will love me.

學生原始範文	教師修正後範文
I was born in Taipei in Taiwan Taipei is the capital of Taiwan, on 21st 1982.There are five people in my family including my father, my mother, my grandmother, my old sister, and myself. My father is a businessman and my mother is a accounting. My sister is a university Student. She studies International trade in T.K. university. My sister and I have good emotion. When I studied in elementary school, my grade is not very good. Because I took part in orchestra of school. I spend more time practicing musical instrument than study. But when I was a junior high school student, I knew I want to study in senior high school, not vocational high school. So I began to study hard. After junior high school, I went to Tang Tung High School . It is a very big school. Now I study in second year. My habit is play the guitar, listen to music, singing and play computer. Sometimes I also like reading some extracurricular books. I have learnt play the guitar more than one year. When I entered Tang Tung High School, I join the Guitar Club. I relax mood when I listen to music. I like popular music, especially the song express one's emotion. I don't have a lot of merit, I am not smart, but I have a kindhearted heart. And I have sympathy, I like to help people who have trouble. Now I just have one ambition. It is enter a good university. I will buckle down and work hard to realize my goal.	I was born in Taipei, the capital of Taiwan, on 21st 1982. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my grandmother, my old sister, and myself. My father is a businessman and my mother is an accountant. My sister is a university student. She studies International Trade in T.K. University. My sister and I get along with each other very well. When I studied in elementary school, my grades were not very good. It is because I took part in orchestra in my school. I spent more time practicing playing the instrument than studying. But when I was a junior high school student, I knew I wanted to study in a good senior high school, not a vocational one. So I began to study harder. After junior high school, I went to Ta- Tung Senior High School. It is a very big school. Now I am in my second year. My habit is playing the guitar, listening to music, singing songs and playing the computer games. I also enjoy doing some outside readings. I have learnt to play the guitar for more than one year. When I entered Ta- Tung High School, I joined the Guitar Club. I feel very relaxed when I listen to music. I like popular music, especially the songs expressing one's emotions. I don't have a lot of merits. I am not smart, but I have a kind heart; I like to help people who are in trouble. At the present time, my ambition is to enter a good university. I will buckle myself down to my studies and work hard to achieve my goal.
I was born in a sweat family on October fifteenth 1982. My star is Libra. And I think there are some Libra's characteristics that I have. For example, I am easy to get along with others and the relationship between me and my friends is taking an important role in my life. I am lazy ; sometimes I prefer staying at home and reading to going out to do some activities. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my little brother, my grandmother, and myself. My grandfather was dead two years ago and I miss him very much. When I was a child, I was not very happy. Maybe I did not find someone who really knew me well . So I can not remember anything about my childhood. And I was an average student in my elementary school. So my mother sent me to Ta-Tung junior high school. During the three years, I found true friends and I learned many things from them. And our friendship is good. I ment my teacher who I was looking for. She played a very important role in my life. She changed my mind and I did not feel unhappy in my life. I also found my goals in my life so I wanted to realize them. I won't be confused any more. I am very lucky to enter a high school without the examination. So I entered Ta-Tung senior high school. I have to study harder than anyone does, but I did not get good grades in the mid-term exams. Maybe the reason is I did not study hard enough. But my friends help me to change my bed study habbit. I am happy that I have such nice friends. Now I think I am a changed person. Maybe I will do better in the next mid-term exams.	I was born in a sweet family on October fifteenth 1982. My star is Libra. And I think there are some Libra's characteristics that I have. For example, It is easy for me to get along with others and the relationship between me and my friends plays an important role in my life. Sometimes I prefer to stay at home reading books rather than go out for some activities. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my little brother, my grandmother, and myself. My grandfather was dead two years ago and I miss him very much. When I was a child, I was not very happy. Maybe I did not find someone who really understood me well . So I can not remember anything about my childhood. And I was an average student in elementary school. So my mother sent me to Ta-Tung junior high school. During the three years in this school, I found true friends and I learned many things from them. And our friendship is good. I met my favorite teacher who I was looking for. She played a very important role in my life; she changed my mind and I did not feel unhappy at that time. Under her guidance I also found my goals in my life , so I wanted to realize them. After meeting the teacher I would not be confused any more. I am very lucky to enter Ta-Tung senior high school without the entrance examination. I have to study harder than anyone else, but I did not get good grades in the mid-term exam. Maybe the reason is I did not study hard enough. Fortunately, my friends help me change my bad study habbit. I am happy that I have such nice friends. Now I think I am a changed person. Maybe I will do better in the next mid-term exam.
I was born on September 23,1982. There are four people in my family, including my father, my mother, my sister, and myself. But my sister died when I was a sixth grader in elementary school. She was a kind and friendly person. However I always had quarrels with her. At that time when she died, I felt very sad. This made me realize that I should cherish everything in my life otherwise it will be too late for me to regret. After elementary school, where I was an above-average student. I often got the prizes from my teachers, and I felt the teachers liked me. In my childhood, televisions played a very important role in my life. I almost stayed in front of the TV set all day long except for studying and eating. But with the time passing by, the school work was getting more and harder. I couldn't spend much time watching TV, and started to study harder. When I was a little girl, my mother taught me to learn calligraphy, and later I had a sense of achievement from it. The special ability made me gain a lot of friendship and brought some happiness to me. Besides, I like to paint, especially sketch. I can spend all afternoon sketching and then put it on the wall to decorate my room. I have no great dreams. But I hope I can work in the field which I am interested in. And I will do my work with enthusiasm.
I was born in the country of 苗栗 on October 31,1983.There were five people in my family including my father, my mother, myself, my younger sister, and my younger brother. I was the oldest child in my family. And my parents loved us very much. So them gave us the best and hoped us to have achievements in the future. I also hoped that I could not make them disappoint. When I studied in elementally school, my parents were working in other place. They did not care about us by themselves and we lived with our grandfather and grandmother in 苗栗. So I must be responsible for my younger sister and brother's behaviors, and teach them what good is and what bad is. As I entered junior high School, my lessons became much better. Because I was sensible with human affairs, most of my teachers liked me, especially my Chinese teacher. She had a great influence on me. She always stressed the importance of honest, good, and serious. She was the best teacher on earth, and I liked her very much. Now I was a happily senior high school student. I liked reading, singing, and watching TV. I always loved sitting on the soft and reading quietly. When my mood was bad, I always went to singing with my good friends, and my mood would turn better. There were always many interesting things in TV, and sometimes watching TV could get knowledge. So I liked watching TV. Although I more liked statically activity, but I do some sports now and then. I want to be a teacher in the future, like my Chinese teacher in junior high school. Because I like children and I have patience. I believe that I can teach my students well, and they will love me.	I was born in the country of 苗栗 on October 31, 1983. There are five people in my family, including my father, my mother, my younger sister, my younger brother, and myself. I am the oldest child in my family. And my parents love us very much. So they give us the best and wish us to have achievements in the future. I also hope that I would not make them disappointed. When I studied in elementally school, my parents worked in another place. They could not take care of us by themselves and we lived with our grandfather and grandmother in 苗栗. So I had to be responsible for my younger sister's and brother's behaviors, and taught them what is good and what is bad. As I entered junior high school, my grades became much better. Because I was sensible with human affairs, most of my teachers liked me, especially my Chinese teacher. She had a great influence on me. She always stressed the importance of honesty, kindness, and diligence. She was the best teacher on earth, and I like her very much. Now I am a happy senior high school student. I like reading, singing, and watching TV. I always love sitting on the sofa and reading quietly. When my mood is bad, I always go to sing with my good friends, and my mood will turn better. There are always many interesting things on TV, and sometimes watching TV can get more knowledge. So I like watching TV. Although I like statically activities more, I do some sports now and then. I want to be a teacher in the future, like my Chinese teacher in junior high school. This is because I like children and I have patience. I believe that I can teach my students well, and they will love me.

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